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Well, this took about a week longer than I expected, but here is an extra long chapter for you all! I admit, this chapter was actually even longer when I had it planned out, but once I hit 6000 words I decided to cut off the third section and integrate it into Chapter 4.
So in Chapter 3, we finally get to see some Pokemon action, and a few mistakes too (uh oh!). I really enjoyed writing this chapter, but I kind of wish I made the battles themselves a little longer and the explanations a bit shorter in hindsight, but overall I think this chapter came out decent. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
(Also, yeah these Pokemon won't be talking in this series, I can't remember if I mentioned that already. I think, were a Pokemon able to be understood with absolute clarity, it would cut into the story I am writing, so that's how it has to be here. I have something a little different planned for later chapters though, which you'll see soon enough!
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So in Chapter 3, we finally get to see some Pokemon action, and a few mistakes too (uh oh!). I really enjoyed writing this chapter, but I kind of wish I made the battles themselves a little longer and the explanations a bit shorter in hindsight, but overall I think this chapter came out decent. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
(Also, yeah these Pokemon won't be talking in this series, I can't remember if I mentioned that already. I think, were a Pokemon able to be understood with absolute clarity, it would cut into the story I am writing, so that's how it has to be here. I have something a little different planned for later chapters though, which you'll see soon enough!
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Technique ImpactAfter many, many, many months and i mean months of waiting, since december of last year. I am thrilled to see and read hapter 3 of this lovely series. I read the first one which go tme hooked, and the second one that drew me in, and i have to saw this is immersing me into the whole series i can already see in my mind how Remus Emerentius Draco (Red) looks and how red and green look. Only thing i wish is that you would make it a tad bit longer, but everything else is A+, i hope to see more sooner than later.
-OrobosVsArt